A Poem by Angie Diane♥♥

Short poem. Been awhile!

Every moment we wait
Another wound opens
Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open

© 2014 Angie Diane♥♥

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Angie Diane♥♥
Just something that came to me. It's short...and to the point I guess. Not my best work...but I haven't been writing much and wanted too...so.

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being torn open sometimes gives us an opportunity a recognizing what isn't working...it does require a different form of courage though. It's about you dealing with you. Not an easy task, but one that is well worth it. After all...it's only natural that after being torn...healing begins. You become realer.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Indecision to take immediate action often results in tears! Neat, succinctly poetically poignant write – says it all really. I like this type of writing …

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
its short this is the fact No. 1
Its Very very very describable which is very amazing.
I loved it, it touched me deeply.
good job and keep it up

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How could I miss this?
Amazing write! I like all that meaning and power pushed into so little but just enough words.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Every moment we wait
Another wound opens"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 5 Years Ago

Good description in a short piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Sad, but so very true...you captured it! Good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago

strong write in so few words

poetic truth


Posted 5 Years Ago

Short and sweet, this poem spoke volumes! I found this piece to be very deep. The last two lines " Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open" were beautifully written.

Posted 6 Years Ago

short and "deep" poem. i enjoyed it

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on September 28, 2014
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Angie Diane♥♥
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