Until

Short poem. Been awhile!

Every moment we wait
Another wound opens
Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open

Author's Note

Just something that came to me. It's short...and to the point I guess. Not my best work...but I haven't been writing much and wanted too...so.

Reviews

[WEIGHWITHWORDS]

being torn open sometimes gives us an opportunity a recognizing what isn't working...it does require a different form of courage though. It's about you dealing with you. Not an easy task, but one that is well worth it. After all...it's only natural that after being torn...healing begins. You become realer.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Indecision to take immediate action often results in tears! Neat, succinctly poetically poignant write – says it all really. I like this type of writing …

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review!

[Haseo]

its short this is the fact No. 1
Its Very very very describable which is very amazing.
I loved it, it touched me deeply.
good job and keep it up

[Bluefire]

How could I miss this?
Amazing write! I like all that meaning and power pushed into so little but just enough words.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Every moment we wait
Another wound opens"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Emily]

Good description in a short piece.

[jb]

Sad, but so very true...you captured it! Good job!

[closed]

strong write in so few words

poetic truth


-Dream

[Warren Daniel II]

Short and sweet, this poem spoke volumes! I found this piece to be very deep. The last two lines " Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open" were beautifully written.

[success]

short and "deep" poem. i enjoyed it