Going Under

A poem I wrote based off of what I was feeling whenever I wrote it.

I'm going under,

I am sinking,

Because my heart is bleeding,

From all the hurt,

All the lies,

Told by him,

By everyone around me,

I am sinking,

In my own blood,

Puddles of blood,

I'm going under because of you,

You know it's true,

I have gave up on you,

You have a hold on my heart,

Now I'm going under.

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great expressiveness in this one showing much anguish..Keep the creative pen flowing. SF