Torn

Torn apart by the people I cared about most,
Torn apart by the words they spoke to me,
Torn apart by the love of my life,
Torn apart for all the wrong things I've done,
Torn a part because he didn't understand,
Torn apart because he wanted to hurt me,
Torn apart because he dumped me,
Torn apart because he treats me like a puppet,
Torn apart because I'm treated like a doll,
Torn apart because I loved him, but he left,
Torn apart because love has blinded me,
I'm torn apart because of myself.

Reviews

[Hippy]

Torn apart for all the wrong things I've done,
Torn a part because he didn't understand
every line has apart as one word except this one thought id throw that out there

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Yes Angela I can see love has blinded you...as it does to all of us at some point in our lives........you may not see it yet......but beneath all your pain...there is a consistent resilience which really comes alive in your piece "don't worry"