Automatic

Based off my favorite song.

Your heart is fulled with hate,
Your heart is filled with metallic instruments,
You're automatic,
You lie to me and I feel like a metal object,
You put horrible words in everything you say,
You know why you do that?
It is because you're automatic.
You will never change.

Author's Note

Review please?

Reviews

[Stammers]

This is gorgeous! the idea, the imagery, the way it's tied together at the end, my favourite of yours I've read.

[Sseoni]

Nice poem! When I saw that it was based on a song, I immediately thought of Automatic by Tokio Hotel! Anyways, it was a great poem. I read it twice and as I was reading, I was using that "read between the lines" concept. I really liked this! :D

[Dev]

Tokio Hotel right ?? One of my fav songs !! :D
Nice write.. gives the essence of the song well