The Fight

I don't know why I wrote this. It might be because I am so interested in martial arts that I wanted to write this.

One on one they stood across from each other.
Looking into each other's eyes with hate.
His dark brown eyes were turning black.
The hate for his opponent growing more and more.
He was only trying to protect people from the bad ones.
He didn't know it would end up like this.
In the fight of his life.
The other opponent had dark green eyes.
His eyes were filled with hate as well.
He had never liked anyone before anyways.
They both knew that one day this would happen.
They would be standing across from each other preparing to fight.
They both got into a stance and you could tell they wanted to rumble.
People were crowding around them to see what was going to happen.
It hadn't always been like this.
They never wanted to fight before because they were friends.
Well the one with the green eyes had done something to the one with the brown eyes.
The one with the brown eyes had hated him afterwards.
The one with the green eyes never apologized.
He had kidnapped his sister.
He told the one with the brown eyes that he would never see his sister again.
Now they want to fight to the death.
The one with the brown eyes wants to protect his sister.
Even if he gets killed for it.
He doesn't want her to die.
He wants to save her.
He wants to show his sister that he is strong enough to protect her.
As soon as he saw his sister and that she was tied up he attacked.
The guy with the green eyes blocked his attack.
Well he tried to but,
He failed to keep from flying.
He flew back and the guy with the brown eyes came down to kick him in the face.
The one with the brown eyes was really strong.
He had gotten stronger from all the training he was taking on.
After school he would train everyday.
He tried to win and he did it.
The fight was over within a few minutes.
The one with the brown eyes was proud that he had won.
People were routing for him.
Screaming his name.
Helping him push on.
He then won the fight and was extremely happy about his victory.
He never wanted to fight again.
This was the last fight he was in forever.
He was the greatest hero to them all.
He saved his sister and his friends.
He saved everyone because of one simple fight.

Author's Note

Reviews please. :)

Reviews

Nice piece, very descriptive.
You tell the story very well.

[Eric Cox]

This is cool. The good guy stands and fights to save his sister and his friends. A cool write.

[Thomas Fleet]

A very interesting tale.
Pretty much like a short-short story in poetry form is what it reminded me of. :P
I like how you wrote it, too...very detailed.
Keep up the amazing work. :)

[Manda]

nice! i really liked this write! very well written! nice write!

[Luna Northstar]

Wow, nice job! I liked this a lot, nice write!~

[Anonymous]

Ooh, nice! Great story in here. It made me smile at the end. Good work!