So Many Things

So many things,

I can’t see,

Though I know,

I have in me,

So many things,

I don’t want to see,

I see in me,

All of this,

Is driving me crazy,

So many things,

I have in me,

Are horrible,

And I can’t express how bad it is.

Reviews

[Shattered Kiss]

This is Cool, A poem about Self Discovery :)

[paul]

perfect rhythm.
you express very well

[Escape My Fate]

Amazing. I love your poetry

[cfix]

This made me sad, You express yourself well.

[Marie Harrison]

We're all bits of grey, not black or white. You are normal. Loved your poem.

[MiidniightSoul]

A powerful and very well written poem. Brilliant. It's unique and beautiful. Everyone has things hidden deep inside, which are unknown to the person who has them. Keep up the good work.

[Brian W. Hastings]

So many things,

I can’t see,

Though I know,

I have in me,

this hit home for me. I want to thank you for putting this to words.

[Liz-z]

"So many things,

I don’t want to see,

I see in me,"

Wow hidden in your own beauty? Or hiding from you darkes fears, youself? Hm. Loving work you've got here! Found it most interesting. Bravoo!

[Emunah June.]

D: ....so sad....I feel like crying now.