You Have Me

Confide in our love.

If the sun refused to shine for you and I, 

We’d still have the beautiful dark night sky. 

While the bright moon, glazes over the sea, 

Under the stars, there’s you and me

When it storms, I’ll be there to hold you close.

So lend me your heart, and I’ll keep it safe and warm. 

If you ever feel like you’re losing grip of your world, 

Let go, and trust me. I’ll be there to catch you. 

So take my hand, and let’s walk for a while.

Listen to my words, and smile. 

Under this tree, we take a seat, and talk about you and me.

For our love is strong, and together there is never any wrong. 

Reviews

[Ara Mosby]

A beautiful sentiment to be sure... I really like a lot of the images that you created, and there is nothing more romantic than the idea of someone who is claiming themselves as their love's eternal rock - "let go, and trust me. I'll be there to catch you". The idea of this is one that gives hope to the hopeless in a lot of ways. I think that a bit of work on the wording might help spice things up just a bit; certain things like, "safe" could be said as "guarded" or "secure" - just to add some extra depth to the language. But I really enjoyed this one.

[Dylan Kerr]

Thank you so Ara, I really appreciate it. I definitely need to work on my wording a bit more, so thank you for pointing that out, in my next one I'll spice it up a bit more! Again thank you :)

[Ara Mosby]

You'll get there :)

[Valentine]

I like the rhyme scheme in the first 4 lines. Your words are sweet and romantic. Valentine

[V]

Calming, soothing write. A love you can rely on, feel safe with this special somebody on your side. I also really like the going for a walk and sitting under a tree picture.