Who Am I?

Who Am I?

A Poem by Liz-z

What humans can not see
I can
For I can see the wind blow
I can see love flow
What humans can not feel
I can
For I can feel all feelings
All touch
I can touch a soul
Found deep below
What humans can not do I can

I can fly across the universe
I can jump from fifty feet tall and survive
I can make myself disappear within a second
I know almost everything...
Physically
Mentally
Dominantly
Anything

Why?
I don't know...
The only thing I really don't know
I wish I did though
How?
I feel it running through my vain
I feel the power of knowledge
Straight
Bravery
God?
I don't think so
I'm no god
I might be special
But not god
Human?
No... Impossible...

© 2010 Liz-z


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I love this one. Even though it is quite detailed, it is quite simple and to the point. I like your style of writing. Keep it up. I will continue reading.

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aww it's wonderful got me thinking :) Great imagination
"What humans can not see
I can
For I can see the wind blow" "I can touch a soul"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this one. Even though it is quite detailed, it is quite simple and to the point. I like your style of writing. Keep it up. I will continue reading.

Thanks for reviewing my poem. I hope you like them. I have tons more.
I would appreciatebany of your comments

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really beautiful and touching.This tells that there is someone different in this world and that person is special because he or she has what we don't have and what we might want. Good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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