Earth Is Beautiful

Earth Is Beautiful

A Story by Liz-z
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Inspired by Love Is Dead's poem "Near" I recommend you check it out, it's really cute!

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Every single day gives us a chance
A new beginning to
Realize the mistakes,
The murders we committed, the pain we cause, and how we are
Hurting this beautiful word.

It's going to kill us all, and the longer we wait, the
Sorrier we'll get...

Being more aware of the beauty will help
Earth needs us, just as much as we need Earth.
A life, our life, will be rewarded.
Unique identity will still be our tittle
This is me, crying for help
Identify the issue is the first step
Friends and family, help
Us get through the next step together
Lets save this save this beautiful world.

© 2010 Liz-z


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Great universal truths in this poem, I like it alot!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautiful and it is true that the earth is beautiful but not every part might not be.Look at all the murders.......robbers,muggers,etc.

and im happy that "im your new inspiration" haha lol jk just my poem Near is your inspiration..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Liz-z
Liz-z

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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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