The Moon Is Ours

The moon is so bright
It shines like the sun
With only it's color as the difference
(White and slightly blue)

The moonlight burns the sky
Scaring away the stars
And watches the clouds
Slowly walk away
(Painfully)

The moon is so bright
That the waters show it's reflection
It happens to look like it's
Watching itself
From a honest mirror
(And a freezing cold one)

They say the moon is only so bright
So big
So
 (Full)

When two people
Fall in love
And steal the moon
And simply call it theirs.
(Just for this one night)

Reviews

[FlawedByDesign]

When I think of two people in love I think of happines and joy among other things.
Where your poem detracts from this sentiment is with words like "painfully" and "a freezing cold one". Words like these do not provoke love in me and it's hard to imagine the moon being described in the way it is "When two people
Fall in love."

Good effort.

[DamienHino]

Love is that powerful...makes you feel the whole world wants you to succeed.

[Faceless Love]

I love full moons. I love the imagery in this poem. The words that used to paint this scene are beautiful. My favorite is the last stanza.

[Love Is Dead]

Amazing write Liz-z! I love it. I like it when the moon is so bright.