Just As It Use to Be

I'll hug you tight,
We'll snuggle close
And you'll kiss my nose

I will whisper in your ear
What I fear
While we watch the starlight
And the moon shining bright

I'll lay my head
On your body
And we'll sleep
Until we wake

I'll dream about the good times
Remember it was spent with you

I'll smile when I wake up
Because it's

Just as it use to be.

Reviews

[DamienHino]

"We'll snuggle close And you'll kiss my nose I will whisper in your ear What I fear"
Dang I could relate to every line on this poem, but probably couldn't word it as beautiful and cute as you did. This poem made me smile, AWESOME!"I'll lay my head
On your body" Nice thats what I call love :)

[thatbryngirl]

I looove this. so much. great write! i love the middle stanzas:
"I will whisper in your ear
What I fear
While we watch the starlight
And the moon shining bright

I'll lay my head
On your body
And we'll sleep
Until we wake"

Especially the second one that starts with "I will whisper..."
going into my favorites:)

[Jeff]

Excellent poem. I think most of us have had a lover come back and felt the exact same way.

[Mai Aliza]

I really, REALLY loved the flow of the words when i read them. They fit together so well. My favorite stanzas are the 2nd and 3rd.
"I will whisper in your ear
What I fear
While we watch the starlight
And the moon shining bright"
Very strong lines.
Great write!

[Forever Mine]

This is short and sweet : ) I loved it

[Patricia Gayle]

Short, sweet, and perfect in its simplicity. Great write!