Lie to Me

A melody I've had in my head all day turned in to a song? What do you think?

Before you head out those doors
I need to have some closer
Please listen before you go
Forever

Did I ever mean something to you
Or was this all bitter?
When you slept all night shaking
Was I your nightmare?
Please. Do
Tell
Did you ever consider me
Beautiful, wonderful, something worth wild?

(chorus)
Lie to me, lie to me
Was I ever worth the time? Oh please
Lie to me, lie to me
When you close your eyes did dream of me?
Lie to me, lie to me
When we kissed was it ever me you'd see?
Lie to me, lie to me
Or was it always her in your mind?
...

It's really funny, come to think of it now
I saw all the signs
From the first time you tried to keep it
You dirty little lie
I didn't sleep that night
Wondering if you'd still be mine
I remember crying that night
Ignoring it, denying it
Asking myself why...

Did I ever mean something to you
Or was this all bitter?
When you slept all night shaking
Did I end up in your nightmare?
Please. Do
Tell
Me.

(chorus)
Lie to me, lie to me
Was I ever something special to you?
Lie to me, lie to me
Or just a waste of time? (Please tell me)
Lie to me, lie to me
Did you ever think I was beautiful?
Lie to me, lie to me
Will you miss me when you leave?
Or is it her you'll see?

As you leave, enter the rainy night
Please do this for me
Lie to me one last time.

Author's Note

I know, not so good, writing songs isn't my thing. In fact, this happens to be the first completed song? Well first song I've written completely that I remember...
Hope you enjoyed and hope to read you're most honest input!

Reviews

[FocusedAmnesia]

"I need to have some closer [closure] "

I like the chorus. It's catchy, which is good for a song. I like that it doesn't rhyme.

[Crinkle°]

a song? yes why not! nice poem anyway. Lies, lies, lies... unfortunately an endless subject, sometimes.