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It was Only a Kiss; was it Worth the Risk?

It was Only a Kiss; was it Worth the Risk?

A Poem by Liz-z

It was only a kiss; it was only a kiss
But it leads on to something like this:
But now I'm stuck in a trance
And
I need to find a way out but
I'm saying
'Lay me down'

It's only a kiss; It's only a kiss

Was it really worth my time?
It's only worth a dime
But it was right at the time.
And
I'd rather not know
Since the glow is now a troll
By the sound of you heart beating
I rather not go.
I shouldn't have gone.

It was only a kiss; how did it lead up to this...?
Was it worth the risk?

© 2010 Liz-z


Author's Note

Liz-z
It sort of just happen. I didn't spend too much time thinking, just sort of flew out of my head and into the computer screen. Which is sort of nice since I haven't been able to write in over a month or so...
So, what did you think... kind of wanna know...
I kind of had Mr Brightside stuck in my head by the Killers while I was righting... so... = enjoy... :D

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Nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


I was reading it to the rhythm of Mr. Brightside, lol. How did it end up like this? It was only a kiss, it was only a kiss~! *hums*

Good job, once again. ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice! xD for some really weird reason this reminds me of that one taylor swift song, xD good work xD really easy to relate to.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol, thid kinda reminds me of how adults tell u not to kiss or else you'll get pregnant. lol idk...random I know. I like this though. Great poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. To me it has a nice sort of flow.

Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Liz-z
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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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