Just One Bite

//Older piece I wrote a little bit ago//

Her body trembled, he sent shivers down her spine.
“Just one bite and I’ll make you mine” his eyes grew dark and his chuckle rippled.
She wanted to run, she wanted to hide but his grip only grew tighter as his teeth grazed her shoulder.
“Relax my darling. Do not fear me.. For after a moment, I’ll be but a memory.” He chuckled darkly and pulled her close.
Her heart beat raced as he drew her closer; his eyes a pierced red as a smirk formed across his lips.
“Do not worry dear, it’ll fill your body with bliss. Just relax and enjoy this vampire’s kiss”

Reviews

[Ronny]

Great work Alec.
I really enjoyed reading this.

Thanks for sharing.

[Eclectic]

Thank you.

[KanaDream]

>//w//< Omagoodnesss!!!! You take the overused 'vampires vampires vampires' and make something beautiful!!! It really shows the dark side and not the sparkly whatever that was created...(sorry if you like Twilight, I like darker things and the sparkle throws me every time). I like how it's a mini story and also a poem. It's awesome!!! Keep Dreaming. ^^

[Eclectic]

Oh my gosh, thank you. I too like darker things and I am glad you liked it ^^