A DOG'S WHOLE WORLD

A DOG'S WHOLE WORLD

A Poem by papaed
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Answer to a challenge to write a French Form Rondelet.

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a distant barking dog

a lost, lonely, lamenting soul

a distant barking dog

yellow light circle in the fog

short chain, a shallow escape hole

friendly shadow, an empty bowl

a distant barking dog

© 2009 papaed


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True to form very different in content but powerfully effective in creating amental image

Posted 14 Years Ago
beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago
Well done! Much enjoyed Rondelet! ~ Helena

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on June 10, 2009

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papaed
papaed

Kansas City, MO



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no erudite pontifications, no complex extrapolations no intentional hurtful lies, just simple age-wise aliteration and prose, of a man who's in the throes of living day to day from his head down to.. more..

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