The Key

The Key

A Poem by Edward Lancheister
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Key for ..........

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Key, a common object that we see everyday
some made from silver, metal or even gold
it could be found easily or well hidden under fold
different utility for many purpose 
to open the unopened, lock the unlocked
the key could start your engine so easily
could open the door of your house or briefcase

there is a key that has powerful functions
key to open someone hurt or mindlessly
some key could lead you into achievement of success
there are a key and solution that bind
a key that bring into happiness

whichever the key you use?, 
an object just in general or could be a capability 

© 2014 Edward Lancheister


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Beautiful illustration of antique keys. I like how you pass the ball into our court at the end of this thought-provoking verse. You bring to our attention that we DO possess the keys. We can see them as so-so, blah, whatever; or we can use them to unlock anything that we want in life, for ourselves as well as for others.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you for your review and gladly could take the message that convey between the lines, bless



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What a heartfelt message. A lovely poem. A key to our inner hearts and souls. Very nice. I really liked this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

Thank you Robert for a kindness review
Beautiful illustration of antique keys. I like how you pass the ball into our court at the end of this thought-provoking verse. You bring to our attention that we DO possess the keys. We can see them as so-so, blah, whatever; or we can use them to unlock anything that we want in life, for ourselves as well as for others.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you for your review and gladly could take the message that convey between the lines, bless
I love how "they key" is used both metaphorically and literally here. Although keys are so very common, they are all unique- like people. Certain keys belong to certain locks- like soulmates. I must say I love the picture as well- im a sucker for visuals ahha

Posted 5 Years Ago


Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thanks for stop by and give a review.
That is a wonderful poem. I say it was also well written. You were able to capture the mean of a key and how it actually has many use and not just the ones we us every day.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you Elsie, for the review and glad you could enjoy the meaning of the poem :)
A very creative and unique poem. It left me thinking, to be honest. Have I opened the key to happiness? How about the key to wisdom? Oh, the key to love? Something like that. I really enjoyed this. Felt like you're having a great connection with your readers. Nicely-penned. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! ^^

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely words. for me the purpose to make poem is to communicate with readers and .. read more
A very thought provoking pen Edward.There is a answer to every equation in our lives like there is a key to every lock.Very excellent poetry :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you Vidya for sotp by and read my poem, your review give me courage to write more :)
Vidya Bacchus

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.You are a very good writer please keep writing :)
I like the thought and clever construction of this piece, including the graphic and the font. I stumble over the last line, however, and suspect it's just a translation thing -- try Whichever key you use
or whatever the key instead.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and correction.
A word Key is always a question how make use of it and underlying principles in life and work how it happen at same time worthy times in order to hold true but a key is always connection one's self to world and universe . great write

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

great point of view Roy. you get the true meaning of this poem according the situation near you :)read more
This poem is effective.. thought provoking poem.. liked the rhetorical questions which emphasized the message even more.. nice write Edward. Keep writing.

~Sophy

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Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

Thank you sophy for take a time to read the poem and courage to keep me writing :)

Edwa.. read more
there is a key that has powerful functions
key to open someone hurt or mindlessly
some key could lead you into achievement of success..

very nice. Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thank you for have read and achieve the ultimate message between words

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Edward Lancheister

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