Empty Vase

furniture with memory

                                                           

 

A vase near the window

Silent witness of moment

Many gift of flower had been stored

With various expression

A moment of joy

Tears of the brokenness

A Sign of sympathy

Love of the lover

Comfort from the grieving

Credit for the achievement

Give a new vigor

or just a simply favor

You still left empty

With lots of memory

Drain without water

Only an empty space at the corner

Small part of the decoration

Left with dust and shadow

Reviews

[Lady Glitter]

I like the ebb and flow of this poem, which describes the vase as the life of a person. The vase has seen glorious times, but is now alone, forgotten, unused. From birth, to youthfulness, to middle age to old age, it has experienced and seen it all in the world of floral tributes.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for stop by and read my poem. the words could conveys well describe :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

The beauty of this piece is how you brought the vase to life. The simplicity overwhelmingly beautiful.

Regards,
Al

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Alfred for the review :)

[Salem]

I liked this piece of work , well done

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for the review :)

[Norah]

I love the personification of the vase, beautiful! Great job I really loved this poem.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Norah, glad you like my writing :)

[Einstein Noodle]

very relatable .. i like the concept .. just an empty vase that holds so many memories .. nice one! enjoyed reading
E.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Mr. E for stopping by and the review :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Something small like a vase is magnified in your thoughts .. the vase is personified to be someone who had abundance of blessings and wishes.but now is void of all that covered with dust.liked the idea Edward.. keep writing amigo :)

~Sophy

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Sophy for stop by and give review. bless :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

You took a simple vase, and made it into something fabulous! I love it, Edward...good lines throughout!


My best,
Kelly

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Kelly for stop by and read my poem, your review mean a lot for me :)

[Ty]

This is a really smart and unique way to show the passage of time and a relationship. Yet the vase itself is representative of someone that was once fulfilled and now empty. Great job.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Ty, gladly you get the message very well.

[Ty]

This is a really smart and unique way to show the passage of time and a relationship. Yet the vase itself is representative of someone that was once fulfilled and now empty. Great job.