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My hearts in my hand

And your eyes won’t leave it,

They look in confusion

Asking why is it bleeding?

But you don’t move a muscle

You stand there in silence

With your heart in your chest

Beating like mine should.

Author's Note

honest.

Reviews

[EMMIE]

AW. SAD =( BUT WRITTEN SO WELL! THE ONLY THINK I CAN TELL YOU IS, KEEP WRITING. YOU ARE DAMN GOOD AT IT.

[Wolfwind Words]

The lines are short, the imagery is potent and powerful, the concept gets across and the overall flow is very good.

Nice ink!
Wolfie

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oof! that was powerful and so beautiful but sad but well written :)

[L]

honestly; this is good. Emotion well portrayed, excellent flow, love it :)