List of twelve poem

Sound of the mountain

The sun rises over the mountain

Its rays shine from the peak

Hitting the tarnished gold

Calling it to be used

It is stuck like lightning

The sound echos through the mountain

It ripples like the circles on the instrument

Starting small and growing

The people of the mountain stop

As the sound goes through them

They are all jolt

Like they are being revived

Its tarnished surface

From generations of use

Calls ages together

In glittering white of the mountain

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[Chris]

I paused - read this - and left. I just came back. It feels confused to me - still.