Just Wait

A few months ago i was faced with a decision that would change my life forever. This is to my soulmate, Hallows! You are so amazing, and time will only tell of our epic . Here is to us!

 

 

 

 

 

Days are colder

yet life still waits

for the sun to caress

its sleeping place.

The longing, so strong

you can hear the earth murmur

..."just wait".

As the wind chills all around

our seed is nestled deep in the ground.

 

 

Reviews

[Athena Manolopoulos]

This is beautiful! Short, yet understandable and to the point. It conveys a specific emotion and I like that. The only thing that I might say to change would be to eliminate the word "deep" from the last sentence so it doesn't read that extra beat longer than the other sentences. I do understand why you would keep it in there though.

[Writer Of Life]

It is best simply stated... beautiful.

To you... this write was packed full of passion, love, understanding and in so little words. I can empathize with this... Waiting builds unbridled hope. I wish you both the best along this journey we call life.

Indeed, we can all stand alone - but together we build a foundation so strong, that no-one will ever bring down.

You gave me an indication that you are the artist, not the writer that your writes are not full of thought. Primarily, words thrown on the page � I feel that within you grows more of a writer than you know.

Thank you for your enlightenment.

Peace with you always...

Candi

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

I like it. It makes me long for spring breezes and thirst for misty rains.
I think that I was a plant in a past life! Lol. Just kidding.
The poem was wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

[Choosing Life]

This is such a beautifully written peace/piece.

I see so much in here I see the weather... But I also see love...

Waiting under the ground to blossom at the right time...

Excellent Scribe, Lady

[Baby Boy]

This is awesome gurl! To me it makes me feel at ease, like a sense of peace! The title is perfect and the words are so soothing! Great write Miss Elii Keep up the good work! One luv gurl!


-JC-

[Darian]

This is an awesome piece, very cool. I like the connection you make to the earth, and it holding your love like a seed. Beautiful. :)

[mattavelli]

This is great!!!
Have fun.

[poetsblade]

well written...nature emoting

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A nice piece...wonderfully written.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

I love your imagery! I also like the simple elegance of not rewriting the Encylcopedia Brittanica. That is wonderful work!

-Gabe

[None]

Your poem is hopeful and displays the patience in your heart. Uniquely excellent!