What You Wanted to See

What You Wanted to See

A Poem by Elizabeth Kilbride

I have eyes that know without pretension.

They know more than what my ears tell my brain

and they know more than what my mouth conveys,

but you can tell they know; you’re sure of it.

 

And if my eyes know (as you’re sure they do)

it is because my chest swells with the warmth

of an empathetic heart which informs

my gaze of how long to linger on yours.

 

You get caught by my ingenuous knowing,

and by the recognition of your truths

in my eyes, because you never presumed

they could be found outside of yourself - but

 

now you start to fear my eyes know only

how to reflect what you wanted to see.

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Elizabeth Kilbride


Author's Note

Elizabeth Kilbride
It's not quite a Shakespearean sonnet, but it's as close as I get.

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Very nice read and good formatting. Your usage of words is amazing and very skillful! Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elizabeth Kilbride

8 Years Ago

Thank you!! That is very kind of you and wonderful to hear.

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Elizabeth Kilbride
Elizabeth Kilbride

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I’m a reader, writer, and senior at Colgate University. Formally pursuing a BA in International Relations and Middle Eastern Studies. Informally pursuing just about everything else. more..

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