enjoying moments

with each day break: a bird sings, the sun rises and God renews all things...

pre-dawn melody
from atop a tree - announcing
new things arriving
that soon I shall see.
the sun grabs the horizon
with his hands an arising pull
up to peek upon new lands
and break a sleepy lull.
the flow of a song intertwined
with the stroke of a brush
a new melodic picture
to linger in - mind not to rush.

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

There is always this inherent beauty in nature. I can only hope I can capture it as eloquently as you. Fantastic

[Rick Stassi]

That is a great compliment. Thank you :) I wrote it while listening to a bird singing outside just at pre-dawn. It was quite a peaceful time.

[A. Amos]

Good one Rick, short yet very meaningful...

[Rick Stassi]

Thank you for reading! I was inspired by the predawn singing of a mockingbird outside my window....

[A. Amos]

God bless you Rick...

[Saddam]

up to peek upon new lands
and break a sleepy lull.
the flow of a song intertwined
with the stroke of a brush.

Beautiful and like perfect point. As we got the pen. Love it Sir.

[Rick Stassi]

thank you for reading and for your kind remarks. they are appreciated. :)