When I find the words

She sits weepin alone by a tree,
Crying life is unfair,,, How to Love unconditionally,
Now that Wisdom an patience has come,
Youth and Looks has fade from me,
And Her cry rings out clearly in the night,
Who would now be her lover,
The sky is now starless, an she slowly fades away cryin in the night,
Wonderin, who would love her now, unconditionally,

But Lord, its Never to Late,

His eyes are moist, sittin silently, remembering,
Wonderin Why, Now that Wisdom an experience has come,
Strength and Vitality has faded from me,
The world is so very cold,
And I don’t know just what to do,
I want more, than I need,
I don’t know…how to be,
And I, So Very far from home,

I want more, than I need,
I don’t know, I don’t know how to be,

Sittin alone in the dark,
Drinkin my FireBall, my Cinnamon Whisky
Wonderin If its too late,
To try an start over again,
Make them learn my name,
Change tomorrow, forgive yesterday today,

When I finally find the words, I will come back for you,
I will return, Yes my Love, I will return,,,
For you And the promises unspoken we made,
Ooh my Love, my very special darlin,
Run away from our selves, an rebuild our own world,
To Drown in our sea of Love, an start all over again

Don’t you ever stop love, I will swallow up my pride for you,
Without you, my Darlin, I am so dissatisfied,
I Been livin here without you, I would never leave again,
Hold on, Lord forgive me, I finally see lifes truth,
I could love both halves of you, if you could me
The two of us here, we both finally see,
Whether close or far away, when thinking of you love,
Your love is thinking of me,  

Like Little drops of rain, falling from you,
and with every little drop, you know I love you more
As I kiss the pain, my salvations light,
You’re the song that’s in my heart, As I hold on to every memory
When I Finally find the words, I will come back for you,

Reviews

[Violet's Run]

I think you let me read this or a portion before.. and this is the final.. it is just lovely.. or the words from wisdom and patience.. and strength is fading..But the main thing is this is beautiful. I love it has haunting beauty.. it has great imagery, rich words and "Like little drops of rain, falling from you, and with every little drop, you know I love you more.
As I kiss the pain, my salvation's light, you're the song that's In mh heart, As I hold on to every memory
When I finally find the words, I will come back for you."

Awesome and ... awesome
susan

[lovejulez03]

Lovely piece :) it made me smile and the way you put the words together was beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

[redflutterby]

Im truly amazed by your style and lyrical words. Theres depth here...soul and wisdom. This a deeply moving piece...it cries out to be taken into the heart. Beautiful thoughts...poignantly painted my friend. Love this!!

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Ah, Thank you my friend, was originally a letter that had written, of everythin that was in my head, cause I couldn't find the words to tell her when am next to her what was exactly in my heart, have not yet given it to her, for some reason have held on to it... Am still kinda tryin to find the right words...

[redflutterby]

Well give it to her...words like this shouldnt be held back!! If you do I hope she is moved by them.