Alter

Free as air

In my own domain

As a walking flare

You contrive to remain

 

As a cherubic dame

You tell

Thy power to tame

I fell

 

World in our hands

With dulcet words

Irrespective of distance

We blend our worlds

 

Though blind and discrete

We feel

Haling to fit

Be real

 

Unexpected spell

To thee I’m confound

Leaving unwell

You can’t be found

 

Like the sun

Without the sunset

Holding upon

With regret

 

The world will not end

Without thy commend

To revive or bury

The remaining glory

 

 

Reviews

[Queen Empress]

It's a great poem keep it up :)

[Chiradeep Patra]

Very nice, keep it up

[emman]

Thanks :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Job well done. I like this- simply amazing!
Keep on writing!

[emman]

thanks so much :D

[emman]

Just a lovely imagery on this poetic hike...

" Like the sun
Without the sunset
Holding upon
With regret"

Truly amazing line.

E.L.

[emman]

Thanks Elisa for appreciating my poem..hmmmm..someone is pulling me down here on WC :(..so sad :(

???? Well dear friend "whoever that may be, do not get yourself ever influenced by." You're beautiful the way you are, and indeed sad...
Always be yourself .... I will at least come back for your scribbles always. As the ones who like your writes will. :) Take care!

[emman]

:( someone told me that I'm a moron :((((((((((((((((((((((((

[stars are far]

that was well done ...
keep on writing :)

[emman]

Thanks for the review :)

[stars are far]

u r welcome