Rejected

Rejected

A Poem by emman
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This feeling of rejection..hmmmm

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A rainbow of smile was such a trend
On the cherubic  night when we chose to blend
The love and happiness that was impossible to bend
That we nurtured and maintained the power to mend

Yes, it was an ever fixed mark
As Shakespeare told me not to embark
If hearts aren't ready to enter the ark
Of love and glory as a heavenly park

I sought and fought without regret
The love of a dame I could never forget
The hands of an angel that had been so cold
The hair and face that I was eager to hold

Changes are now in a gradual pursuit
That is making our world as a corpse and mute
Ignoring what we have started to dream
And rejecting our love that is losing its gleam

Tears are falling and bed becomes a friend
The world is so bright but still so afraid
Facing the pitch black face of  reflection
Of a poor wounded heart caused by rejection


© 2013 emman


Author's Note

emman
I feel so rejected..

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Depressing. Intense. Emotional. Hopeless. I like it, thanks for sharing :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


emman

10 Years Ago

you're welcome..thanks for the review :)
That is so sad..but always be sure ..that great things come at last so be strong ..
well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


emman

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review..I'm okay now..how are you by the way? :D
stars are far

11 Years Ago

im doin good :) thanks for asking :D
emman

11 Years Ago

good to hear that :)
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger...
the theme of this piece is deeply sad but even then, it was beautifully crafted.

Posted 11 Years Ago


emman

11 Years Ago

thanks Gabrielle :D
In life we all get rejected...it's how we handle that makes us stronger...I love wrote your emotions to deal with your feelings...the rhyming couplets are on par, Emman. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


emman

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review..gradually I'm moving on :)
Babe Roxx

11 Years Ago

And that's a good thing...you are very welcome, Emman. :)
Hello, Kabayan. I just accepted your friend request and I'm so glad to have another Kabayan friend here.

When we receive rejection from those persons whom we admire, love or respected, we feel so much pain in our hearts. But then, our world should continue moving not for them but for ourselves. Sometimes we just don't notice that by aiming so much some things which are really hard to hold, we forget that we have already important things at hand...which we could lose if we'll not pay attention to them.

If someone in your right side rejects you, you can look on the other side...perhaps you can see someone is just there standing beside you all the time.

In terms of prosody, I like how you rhyme your words. Nice subject, anyway love is always a nice subject though sometimes the tone is sad.

Poignant yet written beautifully. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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emman

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kabayan :)
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Pax
there are many things I feel rejected about, but that doesn't mean I stop trying...
keep yourself open, and live free from the feeling of rejections...
coz like the quote says: there is nothing to fear about rejection, it's just a nudge in a better direction...

nice work kabayan...

Posted 11 Years Ago


emman

11 Years Ago

Kabayang Pax thank you so much..its nice to be back here..been months ko nawala due to a very busy s.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

maayo kay di na busy, daghan na time para sa art :), keep expressing kabayan, and you're most welcom.. read more
emman

11 Years Ago

thank you so much kabayan! :D
This poem speaks so..cheer up friend! you'll be fine..soonest :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


daisyreelorraine

11 Years Ago

Been there too..like for the nth time..haha..perhaps, that's even an understatement. I guess you've .. read more
emman

11 Years Ago

makahilak man pod kog noodles ani oy..hehe
daisyreelorraine

11 Years Ago

..wahehe..durian pud basin gusto ka :p

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Added on September 15, 2013
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