Palm

With different palms

We search for futurity

Guessing of what will happen

To others its fate

 

No words are written

Just lines that is broken

With no direction

Its premonition

 

It’s just a part

Not a start

To believe what is wrong

Thinking too long

 

Just stop reading

Act by doing

You can’t see anything

Lying

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was really nicely written. I loved the rhyming and everything! I loved all the stanza's. I really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Pax]

futurity
and
Guessing
is what i was thinking
thinking too long
its just that i cant see anything
or maybe im just lying...
im an echo in a poem.

its fun to make that..good work my friend.,

[Kuhr Gred]

GREAT WRITE.. keep it up... really emphasize about future :) i like it and by the way, please RR's your poems so that I can review all of them :) enjoy
- KUhr GRed