you did with me

Poem in authors note thanks

Author's Note

You choose girls
With low self esteem
make them feel good about themselves.
Like you did with me...

You tell them you love them
Make them fall for you.
And feel wanted
Like you did with me...

But then...
You ruin them
Break their hearts.
Make them hate themselves again
Again like you did with me

Reviews

[Claire's-Girl]

I like it, but I wish that you had expanded on it more. I felt there were a lot of words left unsaid.