Changes

Everything is in a never ending change,
what was familiar yesterday today is strange,
wrinkles replaces beauty and old turns the youth,
lies become of what was formerly held as truth,
mountains wear out and mansions bats invite,
darkness engulfs what was once in light,
everything is in a never ending change,
suppose you stop loving me, i wouldn't find it strange.

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

the last line....

i like that.

you're very talented!

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[Aehr]

The last line makes a great ending. I wouldn't have imagined this as a love poem in a thousand years, if it wasn't for that line. I love the rhyming, and the sentence formation is good.

Have a great day.

- Rhea Xx.

[Mary]

evolution-devolution-and round and round-well done!

[Ni1408]

That last line is perfect!