Sapphire oceans

Oceans are formed drop by drop.

Sapphire oceans

 

Do not wipe off your facial dew;

Your roots hold on tightly to the ground.

So, You will know the day is new,

When the sun again comes around.

 

These teary droplets make the world

And overflow into deep sapphire oceans.

Maybe crying is all you can afford,

But drought is gone by a rain of emotions.

 

Many drifting rivers have waterfalls,

So walk steady and keep your head high.

As the stream of time flows, you must face it all,

Then bid farewell and join the sky.

Author's Note

Enjoy reading and reviews are welcomed.
Thanks k.h for the criticism. =]

Reviews

[Alice]

I love the imagery you use in your work, everything just works together without seeming as if it's trying.
Wonderful poem :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Enjoyed reading this...great imagery
Great Job

[Dom Macchiaroli]

Good job BB. A nice piece.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

AMAZING. I loved this. VERY good piece. The only thing I can nitpick about (which you KNOW I love to nitpick) is that in the last line, you meant "bid farewell". Very great poem. =) (A++)
KH

[alesuriko]

I personally didn't like it, simply not my style or viewpoint. But it was very nice and descriptive. I think in the end line, however, you mean "bid farewell" instead of "bed." The flow is a little awkward in the transition from line to line, but it's a rather emotive poem with good imagery.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful and positive poem. I was lucky in my time in the military. Always took me to erotic parts of the world. I found great waterfalls and was amazed by the gift of nature. The poem tell a true story. The water moved thought out this world. I like the ending to your poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[*Evelen*]

wow this was amaizing and very beautiful well done :)

[Holly]

lots of underlying meaning gorgeous imagery, I like it.

[Taylor H.]

this is a beautiful poem. Full of imagery. Great job

[Steve]

This is clever......nice job.