Loving you was like...

Loving you was like

A warm summers day

Running along the beach

The cool water caressing our skin

And the sun gently kissed our cheeks

And the clouds sprawled across the sky

Covering the light

And the rain began to pour

The bright zig zags of light

Struck the ground surrounding us

And the sky sounded as though

It was plummeting 

I grab your hand

Imploring you to follow me

But you were captivated

In the darkness

And I can’t save

Someone who resists

To see the light

I never wanted to run

But I couldn't bare

To watch the dark sky

Smother you

As you stood there

With a smile

-d

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Perfect imagery! It flowed perfectly! Well done!

[Kat]

I really loved this poem...very well written. Great job!