WHAT I FEEL FOR YOU!

A poem i wrote about my amazing boyfriend mark. He truly is something :) this poem defiantly comes from the heart and has lots of pics enjoy :) Reviews will be much appreciate please and thank you.

The way you make me feel i cant explain, Words to strong to form anything in my brain. 

Truth be told iv fallen so hard so fast, i'm sure there will be plenty more memories to last.

Your amazing, caring, loving, sweet, and true, this and so much more is why i love you. 

I have given you the key to my heart and soul, and now thanks to you i finally feel whole.

Iv been hurt so much in my past that's true, But no one in this world compares to you.

I love your hugs and your embrace, having you around makes my heartbeat race.

I love your kisses and your touch so tender so sweet, You've really swept me off my feet.

So what i feel for you my emotions to strong to explain, just know thoughts of you are forever running though my brain.

This is how much i love you so, so please don't ever let me go!

Reviews

[Doodley]

A very sweet poem......

There is nothing like the feeling of being loved and cared for. It is a beautiful thing to have in one's heart. You have written a lovely poem that shines forth from yours. Your emotions are truly evident and your rhyme is well supported by your choice of cute words.

Innocent and heartfelt writing. Nicely done!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I do like this poem to but looking back on this... such an old poem compaired to my new ones it's great to see how much i have improved.
Glad u liked it thanks for the review

[mark]

i'll never forget this poem you wrote me it was the very first one its so sweet. I love it :) and i love you :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I loe u so much more hehe mwa xxxoo

[mark]

awww ur so cute :) xxxooo

[Johanna]

A really sweet poem, it made me smile :) Mark must really be a great guy :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer he is im just lucky i found him.... well he found me really haha. Thank u for liking the poem i aim to please :)

[mark]

hehe :)

[Irene]

such a cute and sweet poem...makes me sad when i think of my unrequited love

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww im sorry it made u feel sad. thanks im glad u enjoyed it :)

[17thWhitePrince]

Awe !!! So sweet indeed =D
Such an amaZing honest poem !!!
It flows so beautifully !!!
Just a marvelous piece for sure =D
Wonderful write =D

A new favorite of mine =P

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i aim to please thats me straight out and honest :)
awwww thank chu i try :)
glad to here you loved it :)

[Jack...]

Love is a beautiful thing as is your poem. Very nice.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank chu :) it sure is :)

[popourii]

so cute!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank chu Sandra

[popourii]

You're so welcome ^.^

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:)