THE STORY OF YOU AND I.....

In the story of you and i this is where it starts 

As we have a special place inside each others hearts.

For in this book of our love there's oh so much to tell, 

sometimes were in heaven sometimes were in hell.

One so full of emotion one so full of rage, 

its hard to communicate properly when the two engage. 

So much fighting so many tears that stream down my face, 

Things you've done you wish you could erase.

Our emotions running high as we say things we regret,

things we keep talking about that we refuse to forget.

Then it gets to the point when we've both had enough,

its all so hard its coming to breaking point this is too tough. 

We talk about it and were both so down i cry once more, 

You hold me tight in your arms and that's when i'm sure. 

We come from different worlds You and I but there's something you should know, 

ill never be willing to let you go.

For through all the bad i see myself in your eyes, 

and i know we are each others biggest prize. 

You and I have something so amazingly true and strong, 

You and I we could never be wrong. 

Coz through all the tears and all the fights, 

I know in the end what we have is right. 

Author's Note

Recent write another one about my boyfriend hope you guys like
please review :)

Reviews

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Another lovely poem, straight from the heart and very nicely written.

You have a very strong talent for rhyme and keeping the rhyme consistent throughout an entire poem, something that becomes much harder the longer the poem is in itself. This is my fourth read of your poetry and so far i am seeing also that you have, like myself, the ability to hang emotions on the written word.

Keep up the writing and broaden your themes and poetic horizons and you will become a better writer.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your reviews mean allot thank you they are much appreciated.

[PoeticChico]

"Coz through all the tears and all the fights,
I know in the end what we have is right."

This is my favorite part, I love the narrative of the whole journey. I also like how real it is, Love is not always rainbows and unicorns ha!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Certainly isn't its not real love if it doesn't have its rocky parts.
Thank you for the review Alex. Glad you enjoyed :)

[annabellee]

another gorgeous love poem of yours.
"For through all the bad i see myself in your eyes,'"
This was my favourite line, so powerful and honest like the rest of the poem
Well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks again Anna :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[mark]

awwww you're so sweet babes this is one of my favourites of yours. very true too... what we have is very strong coz we have been through allot and we still managed to pull through it :) our love for eachother is stronger than we think :) it seems impossible to be able to say goodbye to you i never want to come to that point.
i love you :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I aim to be glad it works haha.
I know prooves our relationship is strong.
I feel the same i cant emagine ever saying goodbye to u i cant imagine my life without u in it.
I love u so much