YOUR CAR!

A poem i wrote about my boyfriend and these months without his licence.

I still remember it like yesterday,

the letter that tore you apart.

its almost been 6 months now, 

I hope your ready for a new start. 

I know its been rough for you, 

going without your car.

but you've almost pulled through,

i'm proud you've come this far. 

I hope you've learnt wrong from right, 

and wont disappoint me this time around.

Soon you'll be driving around at night,

Listening to your car and its sound.

I know you have hated transport,

You made that pretty clear.

I listened to your constant complaining,

sometimes that's all i could here. 

I told you i would never leave you, 

I love you not your money or your car. 

I'm always beside you pulling you through,

I want to always be where you are.

I also miss your car walking sucks bad,

The bugs are scaring the hell out of me,

and these flies are driving us mad.

Going on long drives is going to be great,

We are so going out to see a movie late.

Going to parties we couldn't get to before,

This is something i miss even more.

Cherish your licence this time around,

for you now know how important it can be.

Now that you lost it you suddenly found,

that's what it took for you to see.

I love you babe always and forever, 

I promise soon we'll be cruising together :)

Reviews

[mark]

wow we went through hell with this didnt we lol :P
sorry i put u through that hun with my stupidity haha...I've learnt my lesson now i love having my license back its the best :)
we are going to be doing more things now and go more places and long drives :)
it just took me to lose it before i knew how great it was...now i know so i'm glad i learnt my lesson and i promise i'm not gonna do it again :)
i love this write hun its very well done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer we sure did lol :P
Yer your pretty stupid, still are, always will be :P
That sounds great hun :)
I hope so :)
Thanks babez :)

[mark]

me no stupid :'( ur mean -does that face--and crouches in a ball- you meanie :(
it does i cant wait to do all that stuff with you...and i mean it i'm not losing it again :)
you're welcome xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha dont be all cute :P

[mark]

hehe sowwy :)

[Cassie]

promise soon we'll be cruising together :)....wow!!! this sounds like it has so much truthfullness and honesty. I enjoyed very nicely done

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for the review so glad you liked it :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, this poem is truly impressive Cimmy "I told you i would never leave you" you really are a great writer that connects with readers.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you so much hun your a sweetheart :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Such endearing words... lovely write.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

I love you babe always and forever ,
I promise soon we will be cruising together
That is such a beautiful line , and the whole think is full of emotions ,it id truly beautiful:D very nice.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed it :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is sweet and so honest.You guys sound too adorable for words.Nicely penned:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks Vidya for your sweet review :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Neon]

I told you i would never leave you,
I love you not your money or your car.
I'm always beside you pulling you through,
I want to always be where you are.

This above one stanza's pretty good and filled with love not with money at all. Am glad on this earth some angels still love good guys not their money at all. This poem's what that's your heart felt and feel about your love... and as I always say am gonna say it again that I hope he knows how lucky he's to be dating you and of course spending his life with you alias with an angel :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Neon :) your review was very nice :) Im so glad you liked my poem :) Im lucky to dw :)

[Neon]

The pleasure is always mine you beautiful angel.
By the way, what does 'dw' mean mind if i ask???

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Hahaha :P Don't worry :P
Cant believe you don't know that :P

[Neon]

Opps!
Ha! That means..it shows what a Moron I am. Ha!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

hahaha its cool, you know now don't you :P

[Neon]

Ha! Very funny!
You make me smiley :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:P glad i made you laugh :)

[Neon]

Oh my dearest and so prettiest friend, Neon always love being happy especially when angels make Neon damn laugh:)
Hahah! So, thanks for making me happy!

By the way, you just keep smiling as well to make the world beautiful living with all of your cold scents so that every living could feel the breeze of your heart beat to live free from all worries.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

well your deffently good with your words :) One of a poets many talents :P

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Aww :) Cimmy this was adorable ;PP He is one lucky guy!! Guys (even if they don't say it) really appreciate stuff like this. It shows we care. :) I thought this was every good and enjoyed writing it. Keep up the good work, girl!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so much Maggie :) Im very lucky to :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Most definitely :)

[annabellee]

Very sweet poem, indeed. I can imagine how hard it sucks without a car.
well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Anna :) How are you hun?

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)
I'm fine and what about you, hope you had nice holidays :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I did thanks. Thats good to hear Anna :) What did you do for Christmas???

[annabellee]

Eat a lot, haha :D what about you :)

[Penny]

Awwwh.. dat is very sweet cute piece you wrote there. You truly presentedvanother aspect of caring for someone. Well done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so much Penny lad you enjoyed :)

[Penny]

Ur welcum.