WHO YOU ARE!

Another poem about my boyfriend :)

An amazing guy so generous and kind,

Loyal and loving with a nice behind ;)

So many girls, they were so blind,

I had to have you you're one of a kind.

Guy's like you these days are so hard to find.

When were in public you show me off,

Your so proud to call me you're girl.

To you I have more worth then money,

diamond's ruby's or pearls.

You love me in way's no one ever could, 

You don't think you deserve me, but you should.

For every man has his faults,

Just like every rose has its thorn.

The world has become a better place, 

The day my angel was born.

Your'e over protective, only because you care,

You don't like it when I'm out late at night.

I actually love that about you, i want you there,

even though i swear i'll be alright.

You have few friend's, i honestly don't get why,

Although you could make more easily, without having to try.

Because you're an amazing guy with a heart of gold,

You'll always have my hand to hold.

I believe in you babe, more then you may ever know,

I know one day all you're dreams will come true.

I always will babe, and i hope that does show,

when that day comes, ill be right beside you!

Reviews

[mark]

awww you're so sweet babe.
i love it!!!
im sorry i don't feel good enough sometimes i just feel like i can be a better boyfriend at times...but then i realize there are worse than me out there...way worse.
but i just want to be a perfect boyfriend to you, i hate saying the wrong things...i hate our fighting.
i love that i can't stay mad at you though :)
i would choose you over $1000000000000000000000000000000000000 hun
i can never choose money or anything over you...your priceless :) nothing can buy you out ever :)
i love showing you off in public :) i just get nervous sometimes coz im shy, depends where we are. other than that i will show you off almost everywhere :) you are the most amazing, sweetest girl in the world...and i love you with all my heart so i enjoy doing that hehe :)
we need to go watch the sunset and have some picnics and stuff hun... we will be even happier then coz its so romantic and me being romantic always makes you smile :)
i just always want you safe, theres so much idiots out there and i would hate myself if something happened to you coz i couldnt get there on time :)
and babe my dream has already come true :) you're my dream and i got you already. that's all i need :)
that't all that matters to me...the love you give me is more than enough.
thank you for this babe i love you :)
beautiful write hunny xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I try hehe i try:P
Good :)
I know hun, but you do the best you can do :) you just say really bad things sometimes, like today. Im sensitive and things like that hurt me, but i know you dont mean to.
I cant stay mad at you either :)
I know you would your an amazing guy, i still cant believe your mine.
Yer i know we will have some picnic's sometime promise :)
Your so sweet, thank you for your long as review it means a lot :)

[mark]

i know i say things i dont mean and it hurts you i gotta stop :/ things just come out wrong a lot :( sowwy hunny.
and i hope we can coz picnics are so romantic :) and there could be surprises too hehe :P
thanks babe you're sweet too and you're very welcome babe :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Its ok babe i know you don't mean it.
Oh what kinda surprises? Kinder surprises? :P

read moreIts ok babe i know you don't mean it.
Oh what kinda surprises? Kinder surprises? :P

[mark]

read more??? and u will find out when the day comes hehe :P how come u said read more?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

UMMMM i did't it showed up there weird huh?

[mark]

yeah did u write more or something? or was that it?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

no that was it lol

[mark]

ok gorgeous :)

[Shaquana Adams]

This is so sweet and beautiful. I loved it :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Bowers]

jeez, what a romantic piece,
I love how you added "with a nice behind" that was a fun line, with the smiley face at the end of it
that just made me laugh, but in all honesty I think this piece was great, and I only wish I can find a guy as special as this for myself :P your a lucky woman! great write!
p.s. hes lucky to have you too :) !!!!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you hunny for your wonderful review :)
I am extremely lucky this I know.
I am sure you will find someone great oneday... I hope he is worthy of you though....

[Bowers]

HAHA great rhyme yet again! :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I didn't mean that one haha :P

[Bowers]

haha THAT'S funny! I love it when that happens!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA YER :p

[Tina Louise UK]

aww that was so beautiful hun, you are both so lucky to have each other xx

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww thank you hunny :)

[Erik Daniel]

Wow. This is a very beautiful poem! Whoever the guy is he is definitley lucky to have you! Great write!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you. I am very lucky to have him as well :)

[cycy]

aaaaaww, this is so sweet cimmy, i love it *sniff sniff*

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA! thank you hun :)

[annabellee]

Another adorable and sweet write of yours, which shows how truly happy you are with him :)
Great job!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you so much anna :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Okay so I'm writing another review. Hopefully it'll get this whole thing. This was freaking adorable and I loved it and he seems like an amazing guy :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

That was annoying haha XD it cut it off twice

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you Maggie and he sure is :) HAHA! computers aeeee :P

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Hahaha ikr!! crazy :P And anytime :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha :) unbelievable :)

[Penny]

Awwwh... yuno it is these poems which compell me to believe in luv again even if i don't want to. And dat feeling of being non desrving, i truly get it. Luvly poem and i luvv d rhyming too :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww thanks Penny :) Your lovers out there i know it dont give up on love :)

[Penny]

My pleasure and yes the search is on..

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha best of lucky :) im sure anyone would be lucky to have you :)

[Penny]

Ha. Ri8 nw my mirror is.. lol.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha :P i bet it is :P some day some guy will be to :)

[Penny]

Hopefully :-)