MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

A guy who is in love with a woman who is a mess in many way's.

Everymorning you rise from your sleep, 

Everymorning theres secrets you keep. 

Everymorning you have a messy head of hair, 

Every morning I'll always be there. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Your wall is up, for you've had a tough life,

Your wall is up, but someday ill tear it down.

Your wall is up, oneday i'll make you my wife,

Your wall is up, you always wear a frown,

but someday i'll turn it upside down.

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Never happy with how you look, 

Always wanting someone to hold.

Never easy to read, nor an open book,

Always crying out in the cold. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

One day when your walls come down, 

I'll drive away the hurt and pain. 

One day when you come around, 

I know i can make you happy again. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

I'll pull you up and onto your feet, 

Ill hold you close and never let you fall.

Because your best girl i'll ever meet,

You're worth it all.

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Everynight I'll watch you as you sleep,

Everynight for you're the one i'll cherish and keep.

Everynight I'll smile to myself as i lay in our bed,

Everynight I dream of the day we will be Wed!

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

This is truly powerful. One is truly lucky to have someone who will stand by them through thick and thin, accept and love them as they are, and soothingly let them relax a bit more and open up at their own pace. And it is possible if two people want it to happen and work at it together!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the wonderful review :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

you are welcome

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Your writing is stunningly beautiful, poetic, vivid with gentle images and wonderful language.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you. That means allot :)

[Steve L.]

Rarely in life does another come along that will be there for you, through everything. Very well done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the review :)

[Grant Duncan III]

Being there for someone and appreciating the beautiful mess is amazing! Really enjoyed this piece, love the way it's presented! Can't wait to read the rest!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Glad you enjoyed :)
thank you for your review :)

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work, reminds me of 3days grace song biggest mistake,
which is one of my favorites. Lots of emotions, romantic and written great!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks James:)

[ron]

This is a beautiful poem about loving someone so much they will endure all they have to, to heal their pain and make them feel loved.
A wonderfully beautiful poem.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you Ron, for your woonderful review. ill review you soon, on the phone atm

[ron]

You are most welcome cimmy.

[AprilRN1210]

What a gorgeous write... oh my goodness... I love this!... so touching and breathtaking... You should love someone for their flaws instead of in spite of them.. you take them completely--showing understanding and acceptance for WHO they are... "mess" and all.... this one is incredible... the love and affection expressed in this piece is palpable and real... it is unconditional and sincere... wow... did I say I loved this?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much April, your review is wonderful, really put a smile on my face. A review Well worth reading :)
So glad you loved the meaning of it, and loved the poem.
You may have mentioned it a few times :P

[AprilRN1210]

ha! well, I meant it!! it was definitely my pleasure:)
you're quite welcome....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks again :)

[annabellee]

Haven't been on a while, now that I've come back I come to see you still write those awfully adorable poems :)
Very well written and I like it a lot :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun :) missed you what you been up too :)

[annabellee]

You're welcome :)
I've just been busy with university and haven't really been writing a lot :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer I have had writers block for a few months has sucked lol. Think im slowly over coming it )

[annabellee]

yeah that totally sucks

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

really does :(

[MsJewel]

So sweet and romantic...it sounds like love to me - to love someone for their faults and see these things as beauty...that is exactly how love should be.

Your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you Julie :)
Such a lovley review :) glad you enjoyed :)

[Johanna]

It was like watching a movie in my head while reading it, wonderful write Cimmy! so good!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thanks hun. How have you been?

[Johanna]

Really good, but very busy :) We have exam´s in norway right now.. Found out what subject I had for the last one today, we have two days until we have to present so will be a late night tonight, but I got english so I´m happy :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

English is the best subject :)
Im sure you will do great :)