HALF A HEART!

I was inspired by the song half a heart from one direction. Once again this is dedicated to my amazing man! I truly am half a heart without you.

I'M HALF A HEART:

When we're apart I'm just not quite myself,

I'm missing pieces and I no longer feel complete.

Like a book with missing pages, pulled from its shelf,

Half of me goes with you, as does the books sheet.

I'M NOT MOTIVATED:

I'm not motivated to do things we usually do together,

I hibernate like an animal in stormy weather. 

I miss you far too quick, far too soon,

I'm like a song that has no tune.

I FEEL LIKE:

A puzzle missing its most important piece, 

Putting it together just wouldn't be the same.

Like a paper once so perfect, that now has a crease,

Like a poor sad little dog that no one will claim.

I NEED YOU:

I need you like a hot air balloon needs fire to fly,

I need you like a bird needs to soar in the sky. 

I need you like the world needs night and day,

It can't have one, it needs both, that's just the way.

I WANT YOU:

I want you like a kid wants some toys,

Just like that its you that brings me my joys.

I want you like a dog wants attention, and even a pat,

I also love attention but in different ways than that. 

I'M HALF A HEART:

So when you read this, just to let you know, 

My feelings for you will continue to grow. 

I'm half a heart when you're not here,

I hope this poem has made that clear.

Reviews

[Sati]

This poem is such an honest one, Cimmi. You have related the whole feeling of love with all possible emotions and passions of this universe. Like nature, earth, sky, science, animals, humans, objects - it just shows the depth of the love that you hold in you. Beautiful piece of writing. Very true to what you have defined yourself as - 100% unique and totally you! :-)Good read.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww what a beautiful review :)
thank you so much :)

[Sati]

You are welcome!

[barleygirl]

Playfully & artfully expressed! Frankly, I'm not a fan of this kind of devotion . . . it sounds a little like submerging oneself into the other person more than my liking. But I know most people do long for these feelings, if they don't already enjoy them. Your message is heartfelt & realistic for the situation. I like the way the structure is parallel for each paragraph, using a different aspect of the feelings you're expressing. Anyone would love to feel this kind of devotion (anyone but me, that is) *smile* (((HUGS)))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im still very much my own person believe me. My boyfriend and i are pretty different.
Not everyone wants to feel like this. Everyone is different. I love your honesty :)
thanks again for another review

[Inject Positivity]

Can't get more beautiful and romantic than this... What a beautiful way to pour out your heart's words for the person you love so very deeply... Each new stanza brings more innocence, love and thankfulness for the person about whom you wrote this poem... This is what makes love so special and for that one person our whole being transforms... You didn't use any flowery words to present your love, you just wrote it with a simple loving way and that's what makes this poem so incredible my frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your reviews are always so wonderful.
I love them.
Thank you :)

[Ardra]

So beautifully written....loved it....the format is nice ..would like to try like this someday :).... Thanks for sharing it with all of us

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you for your review :)

[Jamestown]

Well done my friend:)
I really like the format and message,
I'm so happy that you have a great guy to lean on!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you James :)

[FateDictates]

loved this work and you kept the pace and rhythm throughout, well done...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[stars are far]

i will make another review to this poem, to which the title is always attractive to me, since that song is one of my favorites and when i sent to my ex, without mentioning my name he knew it was me, yor words had made their way straigh to my broken heart as i felt every word like its hitting me.. i know that muy previous coment doesn't give it ,its worth,because its more than very great..
i know that sometimes when you write something and get such comment you feel like "Thats all.." but six months ago, i was so tensed with the missing of him, and that song, made me sad... for now. your poem is very true and real, and it is great and more than that.. its wonderfully done.. great work ...
hope you never pass through that again, and if you are still ,i hope you feel better soon.
with love Suhad :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww this was truly a beautiful review Suhad, its reviews like this that make me feel confident and really good about my work.
Im glad you could relate to my poem so much, and that you made the effort to come back and write an even better review. It really means allot.
I really hope your allot happier then you where back then because you deserve to be happy. :)
This was actually a happy poem I wrote to my bf about how he makes me feel, im still with him now, and he makes me happy :)
Thanks again for this amazing review.
God Bless you :)
Cimmy :)

[cycy]

aaaaawwwww cimmy this is so beautiful and swwet i wish you two all the love and joy u could possibly have mwaaazies, ps- sorry for the late review

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thats fine hun thank you :)

[Penny]

Very personal poem. Surely love is in the air. I can relate to it very well. Guess I have found love too. Your poem, rhymes very well and the similes are unique. Loved it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks hun glad you enjoyed :)
You have? Well im very glad :)

[Penny]

My pleasure. And yes I hv ------- , i think so atleast. ;-)

[Laura Harrison]

This is such a lovely piece :) didn't like the image at the end though lol ;) (not a 1d fan!)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha thanks hun, but there good :P

[Laura Harrison]

I think it's more the fans that spoil them for me lol if most of them weren't crazy I'd probably give 1d a chance haha

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA! They go a little overbored but thats not ID'S fault :P