DENSE

How can you be so dence?
How can you just not know?
How can something so simple,
Make your brain pop like a pimple?
How are you so dense?

How can you seriously not tell when im upset?
Or maybe the thought of talking about it makes you sweat.
Do emotional weman really make men run and hide?
Leave us for hours, knowing we sat and cryed...
How can you be so dense?

How can you be so dense?
How can you just not know?
How can something so simple,
Make your brain pop like a pimple?
How are you so dense?

How can you just say an ok, when we lie and say we're fine?
How do you get over an intense argument, with dinner and wine?
How can you just move past the big things, without a second thought?
How can you think we're ok now we"re happy, when we are still so distort..
How are you so dense?

How can you be so dense?
How can you just not know?
How can something so simple,
Make your brain pop like a pimple?
How are you so dense?

How can you sit there and not seem to support me in things i create?
Are my passions not as important as whatevers on your plate?
How can you sit there and not seem to care?
Am i being unreasonable? Am i overthinking, or is this not fair?
How are you so dense?

How can you be so dence?
How can you just not know?
How can something so simple,
Make your brain pop like a pimple?
How are you so dense?

Reviews

[Jibey]

I'm afraid many of us are too insensitive even to those we love. This writing so we;; captures the frustration of having deep feelings and warm aspirations that are trampled on . The attempt to 'buy off' the service of the other with formal gestures exposes the real need for time and interest and attention... Too often we guys don't get it... but we need your emotional maturity.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I wish guus and girls worked a little more the same, because we are so different it leads to miscommunication and misunderstandings. It sucks. Thanks for the review

[Chris Shaw]

I smiled while reading your poem cimmy, recognising some of the questions you asked in my own relationships. All I will say is Men are from Mars and Women from Venus. I sense frustration here. Your refrain worked well.

Chris

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I was fustrated when writing it and quite sad. Men certainly are not very smart or considerate sometimes. Its good to know ik not alone in feeling these ways. Xxx

[Chris Shaw]

I have met considerate and smart men as well as inconsiderate and dumb women :) It does work both ways cimmy. X