BREATH LIFE BACK INTO ETERNAL LOVE

It is a poem to be read.

At last, there is no help! Therefore, allow a kiss then we part.

Exhausted I am through; love, you shall not hear more a sound.

After all these years, I find myself truly happy to break clean

so free so allow our cold hands an embrace for this last time.

And with great might we should forget our vows.

Belief: I say, we shall meet again, in another life free of

this anguish of silly pain. There will not be a trace to show

that we held onto love of old.

Now, then, and again. And again, love has no final breath,

as passion fades in this life -- it's bended knee.

Innocence closes the eyes of the dead.

Now, as we wish. So many others giving up.

But we shall still breathe life back into Eternal Love.

:: 05.07.2024 ::

Author's Note

The journey of a poem is within the soul.

Reviews

[Andra Davis]

Oh wow. This feels so Shakespearean. Very old world vibes and so much promise. The use of 'shall' feels so imperative. Good job!

[E.P. Robles]

Thank you Andra! That was the vibe I was going for! :)

[Percival]

Very engaging , simple but effective use of language. A great poem.

[E.P. Robles]

You are very kind! Thank you!