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Sweet Then Sour

Sweet Then Sour

A Poem by Erica Ross

Look at me with those eyes..
Smile at me with that smile
Give me those butterflies
I get that warm feeling inside
You make my vision blurry
But when I see you, I never worry
Every time I see your smile, your eyes..
I know that today will be a good day
When I smell your sweet scent as you pass my way
Give me those hugs that make me melt
Give me that loving that I can't forget..
Why'd you give me this pain that I can't deal with
I didn't tell you to give me that

© 2012 Erica Ross


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I loved this one, it flows & has a wonderful rhyme scheme.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Erica Ross

8 Years Ago

thank you, that means a lot !!!!
This poem has good rhythm and a wonderful lightness to it. A little broken at the end though, you switch gears quickly without much transition. Overall a great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 7, 2012
Last Updated on September 12, 2012
Tags: love, hurt, smile, eyes, sweet, sour

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Erica Ross
Erica Ross

memphis, TN



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