Snap, Crackle, Pop

A poem of Hell for those who deserve it.

Snap, crackle, pop
out of Hell they'll try to hop
they'll be sorry for the evil they do
fiery justice will roast them clear through
when their lives here are dead they will pay
through the tunnel of death hope will decay
visions of what their evil actions cause
will flow in their ghostly minds like nightmare claws
then when they reach Hell they will writhe in torturing flames
agony will eat their lost souls as cursed become their names
who they'll become is victims because victims they bloomed
in the pits of Hell within a dead life forever entombed

People: never let evil bloom from within your souls
never play unjust vicious ruining roles
if only everyone were just and did no wrongs
the world would be free of tears from those who sing dark songs
these ruiners don't believe or care that one day they'll feel flames sting
they'll be sorry when Hell's torturing fire eternally clings
out of the tormenting flames of Hell life ruiners will try to hop
but screams will eternally erupt as they snap, crackle, and pop.

Author's Note

In these times we mustn't let the dark ones win.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way your wrote this story. Gave me a wild vision with the powerful description.
"People: never let evil bloom from within your souls
never play unjust vicious ruining roles"
Wise wisdom in this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rose of Gondor]

*shudder* Excellent imagery on this poem, and I doubt anyone will decide to be evil after reading this...

[Wolf's Dark Song]

They get what they deserve...hell does wait for the evil ones. I like this poem, it reads and flows every well. I like your writing style.

[Black Cat Fever]

Wpw. very dark and chilling but a perfect punishment and revenge for cruel and evil people. I like this. It reads well.

[Tina Kline]

Excellent justice for people who are truly evil. They deserve no better. Splendid writing!

[Star Wolf]

No, we mustn't let the dark ones in. A brilliant and very enjoyable poem. I really like the rhyming in it. This is awesome!