Hades Rising

Hades Rising

 

 

 

burning poems

bonfire of written tinder

love poems

hate poems

distress poems

angst poems

 

love poems

no poems

rubbish set aflame

 

hate

distress

angst

 

nowhere to go

ashes of myself

 

i am not Phoenix

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/219

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

I think most any writer can relate to this.
I love the flow and rhythm

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Kasey,
j.

[MCS]

Love the flow of your words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am grateful for your extended visit, MCS,
thank you much.
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Where is that handbasket full of poems that I'll be going to Hell in? The flames are rising...searing the Phoenix...and there's a hole in the bucket...it doesn't hold much water.

We tend to make ashes of ourselves, don't we.

A good statement, j. Very true.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for understanding, Ted,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Destruction is the devil's work and there is plenty of it going on here. Hard to rise out of the ashes when there is so much wearing us down. Multi layered and clever with it.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The artist is 'his' own worst critic I am told and here you pick up the theme in a flowing self depreciating piece filled with a heap of pathos!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.