tears freeze

tears freeze

 

 

a father's imprint

impaled upon my cold heart

but respect's still warm

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/12/19

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A reminder that they're always within us .a beautiful warmth to cherish

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Fran,
j.

[gram linski]

A father's imprint will always keep a cold heart warm, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, gram,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

The sadness from never getting Over the loss of one’s father.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[Dave]

I really felt the power and warmth of this.

Take care - Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dave,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I love the use of impaled. That tells me how much you loved your Dad, and although your own heart is cold with the loss of loves, he still warms you. This piece tells this reader much about you. Excellent senryu Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...
j.