Graph

Graph

 

 

average love i hold

for you

marginal at best

 

not insincere

just incongruent 

because you are not parallel

 

 but perpendicular to me

with no point

of intersection

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/11/2021

Reviews

[Adeline E. Weathers]

Seems there and not thoroughly forced, like a spiral with no end. Your poems rather have an interesting view in them.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Adeline, and for bringing this old one back to the surface...
I tend to write them and move on.
j.

[Adeline E. Weathers]

That's how it usually is, but it's always nice to glance at your finished creations. I'll keep on reading, good day.

a. withered

[andrew mitchell]

Clever writing J. Yes we are all parallel lines waiting to cross.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, andrew,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

It seems to me that the chemistry isn't there. No spark and incompatible comes to mind. However I would say marginal love is preferable to no love at all. Diana Ross just started singing to me :) You can't hurry love. My muse is butting in J. Another fine write from the professor of poetry.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

You just have to wait, love don't come easy, it's a game of give and take....but how long must I wait?
maybe the next lifetime.
thank you, Chris

[Chris Shaw]

See how good you are with lyrics. You remember them all. You never know with love. It can strike when you least expect it:)

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes love doesn’t intersect immediately and sometimes it never does. Love the use of a graph to show this thought. Creative and well done

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, P.B.
and j.