time table
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
time table
strangers meet
dearly beloveds crash
new blood from the injuries
erin-cilberto
4/26/24
© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
Speaking few lines, yet saying so much ;-} Meeting of strangers can be either nice or fatal. Nicely spoken
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Thank you, willow,
j.
This has to be the most inclusive encapsulation I have ever seen. In three lines it takes us from first meeting to unhappily ever after. Sounds like an ongoing thing. May or may not improve.
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This has to be the most inclusive encapsulation I have ever seen. In three lines it takes us from first meeting to unhappily ever after. Sounds like an ongoing thing. May or may not improve.
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thank you, John,
j.
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thank you, John,
j.
Tremendous work. Powerful words.
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Tremendous work. Powerful words.
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Thank you, Thomas,
j.
Death in three lines. Tragic, but well penned.
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Death in three lines. Tragic, but well penned.
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Thank you, MomZ
new eyes. only three lines but you managed to capture so many moments. really played to the reader’s emotions. well done -mabel
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new eyes. only three lines but you managed to capture so many moments. really played to the reader’s emotions. well done -mabel
1 Week Ago
Thank you, mabel,
j.
From meeting to ending, in seventeen brilliant syllables.
From anticipation, excitement and passion through to coolness, blood letting and the grave, and without doubt a myriad of other emotions in between.
Ace!!
Chris
Posted 1 Week Ago
From meeting to ending, in seventeen brilliant syllables.
From anticipation, excitement and passion through to coolness, blood letting and the grave, and without doubt a myriad of other emotions in between.
Ace!!
Chris
1 Week Ago
Thank you, Chris,
j.
What more metaphoric painting of passion and the sexual act leading to propagation. So metaphoric, brief, with clear images cast in a meaningful message that can be extrapolated from Darwin, to morality or lack there of, to family and generalized to all of life. Jacob you never cease to amaze me with your writes.
Posted 1 Week Ago
What more metaphoric painting of passion and the sexual act leading to propagation. So metaphoric, brief, with clear images cast in a meaningful message that can be extrapolated from Darwin, to morality or lack there of, to family and generalized to all of life. Jacob you never cease to amaze me with your writes.
1 Week Ago
I appreciate what you said here,
j.
Yuk! I mean, this is joy! Er . . . But you see where I'm coming from. I think I enjoyed it!
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Yuk! I mean, this is joy! Er . . . But you see where I'm coming from. I think I enjoyed it!
1 Week Ago
Ya think? ha ha.
thanks, Andrew,
j.
Oh boy to me this sounds like nightmare nuptials. I maybe off the mark but that is what came to mind for me
Posted 1 Week Ago
Oh boy to me this sounds like nightmare nuptials. I maybe off the mark but that is what came to mind for me
1 Week Ago
Thank you, P.B.
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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