paper

am I made of paper?

paper life

paper families

paper towns

paper cuts.

paper blood.

limp paper.

wet with paper blood.

 

one match

one strike

paper inferno

paper life

gone to ashes

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really really like this...great play on words, and the repetition works really well.

and I love your economy with words.

[Chris]

Ya know - sometimes I wonder of the questions such as this... We can define ourselves as we please because it is OUR perception of reality within which we dwell.

I think I understood what you were driving toward but do YOU feel you adequately defined it? I felt I understood your thought flow before I read it aloud - not because I did. A good form, but an expansion might be more compelling and powerful.