God Games

Just a little poem/idea I'm playing with. Only a very rough draft.

God Games

by Erin L George

 

God just smiled at me

he winked through the man on the moon

who nodded twice

when I blinked.

I didn't know whether to smile back

feeling silly with this game

I looked around the neighborhood

(completely new)

and decided what the hell?

I winked back twice - to be sure

and nodded toward the moon.

I wonder:

Does God play games with the stars?

Jacks, pick up sticks, hopscotch?

I smiled back at him

and I'm sure I heard him chuckle.

Parchessi? Anyone?

Author's Note

Open to suggestions! This is the basics of a poem idea I'm playing with....

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

nice, a little confusing but good

[James Paulin]

The theme of God being personal, intimate and involved while being unobtrusive is wonderful. You have opened the door to how to become aware of God's presence if there is an aptitude and desire. I enjoyed this piece.

[Dane Osborne]

very nice. Very whimsical and it has a nice flow.