You are My True Need Indeed !!
A Poem by
Eve Ola
He, My only need !!
You are My True Need Indeed !! You are my beat, That I need to live this life. You are my soul, That I need to stand beside. You are my smile, That I need for more smiles. You are my diary, That I need to write anything. You are my key, That I need to open any door. You are my companion, That I ever need to spend this life. You are my wish, That I always wish from above. You are my champion, Who exactly knows how I feel n how to hold. Because you knew me true Who I am? You love me the way I am. Yes you are my true need indeed, That I need with me, by each second.. ~AK~
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Eve Ola
© 2014 Eve Ola
Reviews
such a beautiful poem. it shows exactly how pure love is and why it is said that love is blind :)
god bless you. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
sweettt thanks a lot priya :)
9 Years Ago
you are welcome :)
Lucky is the guy for whom you have written this wonderful poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Lucky is the guy for whom you have written this wonderful poem.
9 Years Ago
yeah :D thanks Avinash :)
Amazing and positive flow of thoughts. I like the way you led the reader into internal thoughts of what someone is to you. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
Amazing and positive flow of thoughts. I like the way you led the reader into internal thoughts of what someone is to you. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
9 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote Your words are highly appreciated:)
9 Years Ago
You are welcome. I enjoyed the want and the need of the poem.
aw so sweet poem full of love
i like the line
You love me the way I am
shows the reflection of love from him of urs
Posted 9 Years Ago
aw so sweet poem full of love
i like the line
You love me the way I am
shows the reflection of love from him of urs
9 Years Ago
Thanks vashnavi :)
9 Years Ago
your welcome
by the way ' i ' is missing from my name still it doesn't makes much pronunciat.. read more your welcome
by the way ' i ' is missing from my name still it doesn't makes much pronunciation difference at last gr8 ppl have said ' whats in a name ? ' lol
This was simple yet sweet poem, the i e which gives you good vibes:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
This was simple yet sweet poem, the i e which gives you good vibes:)
I noticed a couple small typos dairy / diary & know / knows & not sure about n but this was awesome... loved it!!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
I noticed a couple small typos dairy / diary & know / knows & not sure about n but this was awesome... loved it!!!
9 Years Ago
Thanks your review is highly appreciated :)
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