If I Knew - Love Melody

If I Knew - Love Melody

If I knew how to write a song
I’d write one everyday
It would say that I’m in love with you
And why I feel this way

It would have to say you’re super cute
And as rare as a desert rose
It would say you’re a looker
From your head down to your toes

You are a complete package from above
And as an angel for me
You’re smart charming lovely
And everything to me

You’re my comfort when I’m lonely
You’re my peace when I need rest
Of all the men I’ve known
I must rate you the best.

You're my perfect melody
You have so rhythmic breath
You have perfect tuning with me
Infact, you yourself a complete song

You’re the super perfect for me
you’re the better half of me
You’re all of this and so much more,
you mean the world to me

Still so much is left unsaid,
It would take me far to long
I know how much I love you,
If only I could write a song.


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

The expressions used are repetitive, and the rhyming is not too good either, but what compensates for all this is the feeling you have tried to express here, like a script in verse of a high school romance, mushy and fresh. Very nice.

[Mirra]

You don't need to write a song, this one's sounds like a song. Expressive as always :-) Well penned!

[Kurayami]

I don't think you need to write songs. The poems you wrote are good for your lover.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Aww thank you :)

[caide]

very nice ma................ :D

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Ayushi]

I loved the ending. It's really impossible to express true love and feelings in a few words.
Romantic and lovely :)

[Eve Ola]

yeah. Thanks for stopping by :)

[Saddam]

You're my perfect melody
You have so rhythmic breath
You have perfect tuning with me
Infact, you yourself a complete song.

So rhythmic art and its words as heart beat. Touching piece. Really nice.

[Eve Ola]

thank u saddam i really apperiaciate your kind words :)

[stars are far]

That is very sweet , i loved it, hehe i loved the feeling of love portrayed there , it is obvious that your eyes are having the heart shape hehe,

[Eve Ola]

:D u always said something sweet that puts smile on my face. like eyes having heart shape :D thank you so much. stay around dear

[stars are far]

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful flow of thoughts. Love songs can come in many forms. Sweet whispers of love can become the music to needy ears. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

thanks coyote your words are so inspiring as always :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my Poet friend.

[Edward Lancheister]

good writing, the words that left unspoken could be for goodness or could broken someone heart :)

[Eve Ola]

right. Thank you :)