Crucial Phase - A Girl

Crucial Phase - A Girl

A girl, while sitting near the window
Thinking of the phase with the going flow
The harder the phase
The harder the change
Am I the same??

Having ride to my daddy's shoulder,
and fighting for playing slider,
Having laughter's with daddy's stories
and fighting for buying candies
Having tears, wiped by daddy's tissue
and fighting for playing dissue bissue
But now the Girl is alone :(

Daddy's disappearance make her alone,
Alone she is changed around .
Few colors left behind
But sooner they glow, a tragedy come
Which she called a Crucial phase jump

A crucial phase jump with marrying myth
Where girl is grown up n ready to marry
but to whom she said Yes to marry?
To daddy's or mummy's family?
And by saying No who will stay?

Daddy! Am i going wrong??
Tell me what to do
How to face people behind you
I want to keep all
But everything going by my hand

Keeping all at one is tough
All will end through rough n tough
But i have to go through all folds
Their moods thoughts n folding folds

Ah! Daddy..
Wishing you were here by my side
So i will whisper secrets aside
But more I am going in
The more I am caught in

Oh Lord!!
Wishing to skip this phase with forward tab
or closing my eyes with stronger belief
That you are the one for kinder relief
Stronger Belief For Kinder Relief !!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[priya]

Its difficult to judge a poem so sincere and pure. Your father is your first love and the only man who wont hurt us. I hope you find people who are supportive and try to fill your life with colours. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Priya your words are more appreciated :)

[stars are far]

oh i know.. im sorry for that.. i dont know how it hurts, because my dady is always behind me,thought im not ready to get married any soon, but i know that i will trust what he says the best, i dunno how to comment on your this, but i hope you only face the best people.
well done, that was amazingly written

[Eve Ola]

you are lucky to have him :) thanks for the all kind words dear .Stay blessed

[stars are far]

thank you dear

[Coyote Poetry]

I have three daughters. I do everything for them. I worry, when I'm gone. Are they going to be alright? I felt the sadness and questions in the poem. By reading your words. Your father is with you always. I hope to do the same for my daughters. For them to know. They are strong and they will be okay. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

your supporting words are answer to your question as well. but your presence is more than anything n cant ever be replaced. wish you happy long life so u always be by their side.
I know my father is with me in every though but still this gap cant be filled. life is too cruel at times to fight with..
Thanks for supporting words !

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad I could help. The girls are always babies in the eyes of the father.