Unconditional Love

December 16, 2013

Unconditional Love

My morning starts with your thought
Feeling u with closed eyes when u are not around
I cant express how much is pleasing
Suddenly recalling our last night fight
That turned my mood sad but
Soon I closed my eyes
Soon I forget all
Because I love you a lot
And my love is unconditional !

So here's my busy day with routine work
I knew you scold me again
So I didn't messaged you
Secretly I don't care with the confidence of,
Unconditional Love!
and
The thing I only remember is,
I love you no matter how much you scold me
Suddenly my phone vibrates n its you
I am sorry for everything I said,
Its not you but things made me angry when you are not around,
Seeing all this, n hidden smile by my heart
Whispering me that,
Hey its love unconditional!
Unconditional love from his side too
This bond is enough for our stronger relation
Where we love Unconditionally !

We are passing through the phase
With routine trouble in our ways
I am not blaming the words we said
But its cruel surroundings all around
That torturing both of us poorly
But we put them all back I Promise,
With power of Unconditional Love!

*Long Live Our Love Relation*


~AK~


(I love you this much that i cant feel the pain of hand injury:D
soon i stopped writing soon i realized :D - Love u Mr. Right)

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

You know I experienced exactly all these things in the last few days.. and I broke up. But yes, if there is understanding and love is 'unconditional' these fights come and go like little tempests, that never are able to sink the ship. Very well written, though I desperately searched a rhyme, if free verse only, in this poem. Still its a good piece because of its simplicity. Well done. Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is hard work. To make it work. We must accept mistakes.
"But we put them all back I Promise,
With power of Unconditional Love!

*Long Live Our Love Relation*"
I do like the above lines. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Coyote I really appreciate your feedback :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. My pleasure.

[Aprille]

Such true words of an unconditional love. :)

[Eve Ola]

thanks for leaving kind words :)

[Aprille]

My pleasure. ;)

[anne]

a lovely write....................

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Anne :)

[Avinash]

Wo kehte hain Miya Biwi ke beech me nahi pare to accha hai :D

[Eve Ola]

you are such a wise man ;)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow love is all expressed and poured into this art..

[Eve Ola]

and your feedback is Wow :) Thanks

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Anand Sehgal]

A lovely write full of mundane love :) you have brought loads of smile on my face :)
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[Eve Ola]

seriously ? so glad to see your smiles :)

[KWP]

Love has many aspects to show to us ... but the greatest of all is Unconditional Love ... I smile when I read your words ...they are like a lullaby dancing on a sunray beaming through a window x x

[Eve Ola]

n your sweet words make me smile :) thank you so much KWP :)

[Eve Ola]

KWP so i call you Known Worthy Pearl ;)

[KWP]

aww that's lovely .. Actually KWP is Kunoichi (for the female ninja in me, I study ninjutsu) Warrior because I feel the strength within to stand up for mankind and Princess, because we all deserve to be princesses .... but SHHH don't tell anyone ... otherwise I go by Elizabeth x x

[Eve Ola]

have this strength with you forever n yes we all deserve to be princess n dont worry i wont :) nice meeting you here :)